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Tips for Good Writing

Write the way you speak.

In general, writing intended for public audiences should be conversational, so try to write the way you talk.

Use the active voice.

Active voice is stronger than passive voice. In an active sentence, the person or agency who is taking an action is the subject of the sentence. In a passive sentence, the person or item that is acted upon is the subject of the sentence. Passive sentences often do not identify who is performing the action.
Passive: New rules have been approved by the university.
Active: The university has approved new rules.

Use short words.

Shorter words are more powerful and less pretentious.
Instead of           
Use
automobile           
car
accordingly           
so
reside               
live
utilize               
use
prior to               
before
discontinue           
stop

 

Use dense words.

The fewer words you use to express an idea, the more impact it will have.
Instead of           
Use
once a week
weekly
all of a sudden
suddenly
prior to
before
subsequent to
after
has the ability to
can
held tightly
gripped

Keep sentences short.

Most sentences should be no more than 20 words, but it’s best to vary sentence length and structure.

Question any word longer than three syllables.

Too many long words can make your writing hard to understand.

Get rid of little qualifiers.

Words such as “somewhat,” “quite,” “rather,” or “very” undermine the authority your writing should show.

Don’t start a sentence with “There are” or “There were.”

There are emergency telephones located throughout campus.
Change to: Emergency telephones are located throughout campus.

Don’t use too many “-tion” words.

He gave a demonstration of the new equipment.
Change to: He demonstrated the new equipment.